27-Jul-2008, PH: --------------- o Can we agree on coherent terminology of Canadian Arctic Archipelago (CAA). o Export numbers for free-slip, noslip are not consistent with what I have. Also, do we want to refer to annual mean, or rather integrated annual transport? o You've removed a lot of "basic" descriptions which I think need to be mentioned first before looking at pecularities o Figure 5: Could you refine zonal grid to 10deg. spacing. (e.g. by slightly diminishing label size). o Figure 6: good, but a bit messy as it is now. I suggest to * remove bottom row (ice strength) * increase size of remaining plots, * add more separation between the rows, * add another 1-Jul line (in addition to the 1-Jan) line (for better orientation) Furthermore, an extra Figure which contains same type of Hovmueller plots for * current bottom row (ice strength) * row with ice concentration * row with ice thickness * row with snow thickness * row with SST (main reason is that ice strenght vs. precip. "correlations" don't fully hold up) Finally, would be nice to have a picture of the zonal section.