--- MITgcm_contrib/articles/ceaice/ceaice.tex	2008/07/28 04:34:37	1.22
+++ MITgcm_contrib/articles/ceaice/ceaice.tex	2008/08/14 16:12:41	1.23
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+% $Header: /home/ubuntu/mnt/e9_copy/MITgcm_contrib/articles/ceaice/ceaice.tex,v 1.23 2008/08/14 16:12:41 dimitri Exp $
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 \title{A Dynamic-Thermodynamic Sea Ice Model on an Arakawa C-Grid
-for Ocean Climate Estimation and Sensitivity Studies}
+  for Ocean Climate Estimation and Sensitivity Studies}
+
+%Alternative title suggested by Chris Hill:
+%\title{A Sea Ice Model Designed for Ocean State Estimation and its
+%  Application to Studying Sea Ice Model Dynamics in the Canadian Arctic
+%  Archipelago}
 
 \author{Martin Losch, Dimitris Menemenlis, Patrick Heimbach, \\
         Jean-Michel Campin, and Chris Hill}